What I like: The red/yellow/orange of the eye in the farthest left man, and the skullcap of the man overlapping him.
The actual pictuire it self
The smaller repeating squares on the left give more weight than the larger X blocks in the right forcing the eyes to strart from left to right. That is the correct order, right?
What could use improvement.
The middle man's eye has concentric blur rings going through his egg eye and the center of that circle takes away from the starburst in the 1/4 panel.
Hey thanks for the in depth review. Those are some good points to note, and I d like to hear informed critique.
As I have a habit of using figures incidentally to represent the idea of a human element ( I also will sometimes just use a blue color to do this, depending on the work) there is probably a fair amount of variance between the figures.
Ah I see, thanks. Technically it's a place where they let the animals do their own thing--like chickens, they let them live natural lives running around being chickens for example, before they are harvested and sent to burger king. The idea is that the meat will be better if it is not kept all penned up in a small box.
there are so many details in this piece
What I like: The red/yellow/orange of the eye in the farthest left man, and the skullcap of the man overlapping him.
The actual pictuire it self
The smaller repeating squares on the left give more weight than the larger X blocks in the right forcing the eyes to strart from left to right. That is the correct order, right?
What could use improvement.
The middle man's eye has concentric blur rings going through his egg eye and the center of that circle takes away from the starburst in the 1/4 panel.
As always, good show.
One of my favs
As I have a habit of using figures incidentally to represent the idea of a human element ( I also will sometimes just use a blue color to do this, depending on the work) there is probably a fair amount of variance between the figures.
Thanks again for taking the time to scrutinize.
Why have you seen it around some place else??